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Describe your idea of a perfect world. Include as many details as you can think of.
I always wonder how it feels if we live in a
perfect world. It must be a great feeling, but is there such a place? Moreover,
what is the perfect world? It is commonly believed that there is no perfect
world no matter how hard we try, it just a utopia and theoretical thoughts
which are impossible to apply on the real world. However, I believe there are
several factors that can help human race to create their perfect world.
First of all, in the perfect world all people
have their basic human needs. According to Abraham Maslow's pyramid (1943) people
need to fulfill their basic needs to survive like food, shelter, and clothes.
Next in order the need for safety and security. After that comes the need for
love and belonging. Finally the need for respect of our fellow's and for
self-respect. In the perfect world all these desires are guaranteed to all.
Everyone has the right of living in a peace and nobody should live in fear
of war or famine as well as no place for unemployment.
Other equally important point is all people are
equal regardless of their beliefs, creeds, nationalities, social
statuses, religion, or race. In addition, all various classes in a society
live together under the umbrella of social justice. Furthermore, the perfect
world has clear lows that organize and protect people's rights. In this world,
racism, bigotry, and segregation do not exist and absolutely no one above the
low.
My final point is education should be free and
accessible for every person in general and it should be mandatory for children
due to the fact education enlighten the minds and hearts. Likewise, all people
should be free. They should have the full right to practice the religious
freedom, intellectual freedom, and the freedom of speech. In this perfect world
all people have the courage to speak up their opinions.
To conclude, providing the basic physical and
psychological needs, equality and social justice, as well as education and
freedom are essential when it comes to a complete world. Human kind can built a
perfect world if they consider all these elements. So, what should people do?
They should stay optimistic and work with their governments to transfer the
dream to a reality.
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Hi Iman,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job in presenting the most important components for having a perfect world. Also, I like your optimism when you said that we can achieve this dream.
Hello Iman,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your text and I think you have a great writing. Very good :)
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ReplyDeleteI Really think that you are a good writer (mashalla).
ReplyDeleteI Liked how you described your opinion in a clear way.
Moreover, your message that you included it in the last paragraph grabbed my attention in which you called for a positive action.
Nice use of the maslow pyramid to suport your points. Also equality and respect to other people choices is essential. Such a word may be only a dream, but if at least all people tryied their best, we would be way closer to achieve said dream.
ReplyDeleteHello Iman,
ReplyDeleteYour post is very well written. You followed all the instructions and your ideas are presented very clearly. Your citation also fit very well in the text to support your first statement.
Iman,
ReplyDeleteNice reference to Maslow! You brought up three excellent components to consider when discussing the betterment of the world. I hope that our world improves in all these areas. This is a well developed post.
Nice work!